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半年前 来自穷游

请问旅行计划写成这样可以吗?波兰访友签证=-= 好怕被拒。。白本一个。。。My plan is go to Poland on the 21st of July by airplane. Bartosz Szymański and me will go to his city Zielona Góra which he is living in. I will stay at home of his parents and they will take care of me.I will stay most of time in Zielona Góra city. I will visit Bartosz Szymański's family and ...

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网友
半年前 来自穷游

你前面提到兩次Bartosz Szymański和父母住在Zielona Góra,所以你後來又說I will also visit Bartosz Szymański's family in Żary city,這個很容易讓人困惑,把這一句的family改成relatives,會比較不讓人迷惑。

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半年前 来自穷游

good enough

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